Miss Zelle's Fourth Grade

Wednesday, September 18, 2013

Revising in writing!

We learned more about revising in writing!  We learned to add in details, take out details, work on word choice, and show feelings and emotions instead of telling! Students writing is coming along tremendously! 


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